He bumped into me with his bicycle.
“What the hell”
“It’s not my fault”
“Of course it is”
“So”
“I wanna fight”
“you wanna fight?”
“Yes”
Pause
Longer Pause
Even Longer Pause
“Would you like one in the face…?”
Note: 55 Fiction is a
form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum
of fifty-five words. (this is how Wikipedia defines 55 Fiction)
Like Rickie even I am failing to get poems now.
ReplyDeletewhat does that mean GV ?
DeleteDone total justice with the definition ! Its dramatically humorous :)
ReplyDeleteAhh thanks..!!
Deleteactually this kinds of fights we used to do in childhood,
ReplyDeletebut before the pause and longer pause there would have a question
'do you dare to touch my nose!', the answer and question would decide the duration of that longer pause..
well done friend...
I get what you said... but actually I intentionally avoided a question there to make it look spontaneously funny.
DeleteI'm still not that much mature to understand this 55 fiction...although i loved reading...just make me understand via comment...this one n' the previous one too...!!
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't really need a maturity level to understand 55 fiction, also with someone who reads erich segal and paulo coelho. But since you asked, I tell you 55 fiction is a form of micro fiction where a writer needs to finish the story in a limitation of 55 words or lesser with an extraordinary finishing touch.
Deleteha ha! Very clever Amrit
ReplyDeletereally happy to see you stopped by.
Deletevery well started & very well finished.....keep it up....
ReplyDeletethanks jiju... so happy to see you on my blog.
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